Michael Haiku!

 

I thought it'd be fun for everyone to try their dab hand at some haiku, and what better way to do it than make Michael the topic! :D

For those who aren't sure what Haiku is here is a brief explanation on how to write one:

Write a short poem, perhaps short enough that it can be said in a breath

Write the poem in three lines, with the second line slightly longer than the first and last.

If the "traditional" syllable count is used for the haiku, use this form:

  5 syllables      7 syllables      5 syllables

 

Here is my example:

 

Michael is the best

His singing is amazing

His voice is superb

 

Not a very good one, but it sums up the premise of a 'Michael Haiku'! Have a go, and have some fun :D

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Permalink Reply by Audrey Clark on January 23, 2011 at 10:34am

Here's my attempt.

 

Time, Love, Tenderness

Three words, one singer with pas-

ion...Michael Bolton.

 

Audrey

First New Haiku I've written in almost 15 years.

Permalink Reply by Angelica Simon on January 23, 2011 at 2:18pm
that's a great one.Made me laugh out loud
Permalink Reply by Angelica Simon on January 23, 2011 at 2:17pm
that's fun. Am I allowed to rhyme?
Permalink Reply by Angelica Simon on January 23, 2011 at 2:26pm

You Michael Bolton

You are so so beautiful

I love you so much

Permalink Reply by sylvia doughty on January 23, 2011 at 2:36pm

Hi Jenna,

 

My wee contribution,

 

Hey "my funny valentine"

"let's make a long story longer"

and "go the distance"

 

Sylvia.   Your wee Scottish friend.

Permalink Reply by Jenna Starar on January 24, 2011 at 7:55pm
Hey! great contributions, keep 'em coming :D
Permalink Reply by Astrid Kretschmann on January 25, 2011 at 10:36pm

Hi Jenna,

what a wonderful idea. I looked for some more information and was lucky to find an interesting article on wikipedia. I ignored what I could not handle or had no interest in .-). So here is my attempt:

 

I   Whale’s song. Ocean swings.

     Human voice. Soul flies.

     Spirit breathes peace.

 

II   Singing. Wings of joy.

     Said I loved you but I lied.

     Enjoy the ride - now.

 

III  Life. Cog in God’s plan.

     Breath. If I can dream. The quest.

     Peace. Who is like him?

 

That was pure pleasure and fun. Thank you so much.

Greetings from Germany

Astrid

Permalink Reply by Jenna Starar on January 28, 2011 at 9:46am

Really lovely Haikus, Atrid!

They're great fun :D

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